REVISION

Now that i have had my paper looked over by a couple of my peers its time for me to revising my paper. with all of the positive feedback that i got i plan on having one of the best papers there is. from this point on ill go back over my paper and i will add more details and explain things a little more than i did before. i will make sure that whoever is reading my paper will understand where i am coming from. when my readers are reviewing my paper i want them to feel as if they were there with me the entire time i want them to go on this journey with me and understand exactly why i am an stronger person than i was before.